Chained Soldier CRT: Major Revision (Improve the profiles and add new character profiles)

[Black_Cat49]

How should I start… well then…
Hello everyone. I noticed that the profiles for the Chained Soldier characters have been quite outdated for a long time. Recently, I had some free time, so I reread the series about 2–3 times and decided to update the profiles and add some new ones. The characters are as follows:

Updated profiles

Yachiho Azuma, Tenka Izumo, Ren Yamashiro, Himari Azuma

New profiles

Yakumo Ezo, Konomi Tatara, Tobera Azuma

Note: There may be a bit of bias because I usually only work on characters that I personally like (since I don’t have that much free time). Therefore, other characters may only receive adjustments to their character stats, while their abilities might need to wait for future updates (possibly from others).

And… I hope everyone has a great day.
Agree: GodEarh206, AyOgUyS, DarkDragonMedeus (Administrator), Cipher72, Apex_Predator_GX, ZackMoon1234 (Supporters), Vietthai96 (Thread Moderator)

Disagree:

 

[GodEarh206]

Great work

 

[AyOgUyS]

Looks good, I agree but I'm not an expert on the verse

 

[MysticBrawler]

Bump

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Looks alright to me from a glance.

 

[Mbpoops]

Chained peak

 

[MysticBrawler]

Bump. So how many more votes is needed?

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump. So how many more votes is needed?

One

 

[Cipher72]

Looks cool, I agree

 

[Tllmbrg]

General editing notes:
Don't end brackets with periods (So swap .) or similar stuff into just a bracket).
With internal vs wiki links, swap _ to just empty spaces.
In bullet point lists don't have spaces between the bullet points in the code (So just remove the line of space between them).
Capitalize all usage of via if it's at the start of the brackets.
Instead of ''': have :''' (This applies to ; as well).
Remove random double brackets.
With citations, please remove both the spaces between clumps of citations, and the space between a citation and the word it is in front of.
Swap "is able to" with "can" when applicable.

Yachiho Azuma

Accelerated Development (Training & Battle; The members of the Anti-Demon Corps constantly train and develop their bodies and special abilities, whether through physical exercise or by sparring with one another.)

This requires scans, otherwise the current wording just says that they train, not that they get abilities in a faster pace than usual due to said training.
This applies to all the other pages that have this reasoning, so I won't repeat it for later pages.

Time Manipulation

Not entirely sure the split between Golden Hour and Prime Time is required, since the latter is just "She can do her power even better now." Maybe if there was a key for before and after, but as the latter seems pointless to separate.

Weapon Mastery (Since her power cannot directly deal damage to others like the other members, she compensates by using a gun in combat instead.)

This does not justify weapon mastery in of itself, it's just saying she uses weapons.

Lifting Strength: At least Above Average Human (She is capable of lifting this amount of weight). <citation>)
Put the citation inside the first bracket.

Tenka Izumo

Supernatural Willpower (Despite what her build suggests, Tenka is incredibly resilient and can remain conscious and stand after getting grievously injured by a powerful laser beam from Aoba.)

How is this not just a stamina feat?

Speed: At least Massively Hypersonic+ Travel, Reaction and Combat Speed (Superior to Yachiho Azuma), higher Reaction Speed with Ame no Mitor

This lists all the speed types here, just remove all three if it's her general speed.
Also why is her reaction speed higher with Ame no Miltor?

Ren Yamashiro

Power Nullification, Regeneration Negation (Low-Mid) (via Ability Negation; Ren can negate the activation of Peach Blessings of others, leaving them virtually powerless. Defeat Yuuki Wakura before he regenerates)

The last section I assume is what gives regen null, so I must ask if it really counts, since off the scans it seems like she just hit him very hard and he got knocked out.

Yakumo Ezo
More an example case, looking over the Notable Attacks/Techniques section, it just has "Night Storm: The ability to control wind."
I think you should either remove this section (Alongside doing it from other pages where it's the same level of detail) or explain the ability more in-depth.

 

[Black_Cat49]

General editing notes:
Don't end brackets with periods (So swap .) or similar stuff into just a bracket).
With internal vs wiki links, swap _ to just empty spaces.
In bullet point lists don't have spaces between the bullet points in the code (So just remove the line of space between them).
Capitalize all usage of via if it's at the start of the brackets.
Instead of ''': have :''' (This applies to ; as well).
Remove random double brackets.
With citations, please remove both the spaces between clumps of citations, and the space between a citation and the word it is in front of.
Swap "is able to" with "can" when applicable.

I’ve tried making some initial edits. If something is incomplete or incorrect, I apologize because my English isn’t very good. Anyway, let’s start answering the questions.

This requires scans, otherwise the current wording just says that they train, not that they get abilities in a faster pace than usual due to said training.
This applies to all the other pages that have this reasoning, so I won't repeat it for later pages.

If I remember correctly, they don’t have a clear feat stated in dialogue. However, there are often scenes showing them training regularly to improve themselves. During real battles, they also continue to learn and develop further. Therefore, I consider this a basic ability that all of them have, since they train with each other.

Not entirely sure the split between Golden Hour and Prime Time is required, since the latter is just "She can do her power even better now." Maybe if there was a key for before and after, but as the latter seems pointless to separate.

Even though the difference isn’t very big, I feel that clearly stating that the two are different would be better.

This does not justify weapon mastery in of itself, it's just saying she uses weapons.

As far as I know, frequently using a weapon can justify having that ability. For example, if a character often fights using a sword, they can have that ability. The same applies to Yachiho—since she constantly uses a gun, she should reasonably have that ability as well.

Lifting Strength: At least Above Average Human (She is capable of lifting this amount of weight). <citation>)
Put the citation inside the first bracket.

I’ve tried editing it already.

How is this not just a stamina feat?

According to the description of Supernatural Willpower, it states that “Characters with this ability may be able to resist enormous amounts of pain, act even when unconscious, or go well beyond what they should normally be able to endure.” Because of this, I believe the character should qualify for Supernatural Willpower.

This lists all the speed types here, just remove all three if it's her general speed.
Also why is her reaction speed higher with Ame no Miltor?

There are six types of speed: Attack Speed, Combat Speed, Reaction Speed, Perception Speed, Travel Speed, and Flight Speed. However, this character only has three types: Travel, Reaction, and Combat.

As for the higher Reaction, it refers to the speed of her ability activation, which is faster than her physical body (because, fundamentally, she can cast it just by thinking). So when she encounters an attack that her body cannot dodge in time, she uses her ability to evade the attack instead. That’s why I wrote that her reaction becomes higher with her power.

The last section I assume is what gives regen null, so I must ask if it really counts, since off the scans it seems like she just hit him very hard and he got knocked out.

As for the feat, I copied it from the old profile, so I’m not sure how it was accepted previously.

 

[MysticBrawler]

A few things to note regarding Ren Yamashiro:

• Her Transonic Attack Speed should probably be changed to Flight Speed since it's specifically for her Flight ability
• Her Lifting Strength should be the same as Yuuki Wakura(which is At least Class M) since she was capable of pushing him back during their duel.
• It should probably be noted in her Weaknesses that her Power Nullification doesn't work on one's innate abilities as she couldn't nullify any of the God of Thunder's abilities.

 

[Buraqibear]

There are six types of speed: Attack Speed, Combat Speed, Reaction Speed, Perception Speed, Travel Speed, and Flight Speed. However, this character only has three types: Travel, Reaction, and Combat.

I don't know anything about this verse but this caught my eye. Unless a character's certain type of speed is explicitly calc'd or stated to be higher or lower than their combat speed, it's fine to just say put their combat speed on their page. Usually don't need to specify it

 

[Black_Cat49]

A few things to note regarding Ren Yamashiro:

• Her Transonic Attack Speed should probably be changed to Flight Speed since it's specifically for her Flight ability
• Her Lifting Strength should be the same as Yuuki Wakura(which is At least Class M) since she was capable of pushing him back during their duel.
• It should probably be noted in her Weaknesses that her Power Nullification doesn't work on one's innate abilities as she couldn't nullify any of the God of Thunder's abilities.

I’ve finished revising it.

 

[Black_Cat49]

I don't know anything about this verse but this caught my eye. Unless a character's certain type of speed is explicitly calc'd or stated to be higher or lower than their combat speed, it's fine to just say put their combat speed on their page. Usually don't need to specify it

Normally, when a character runs to dodge lightning—or anything similar—and can still fight while doing so, it should count as Travel, Reaction, and Combat Speed. That’s why I specified it that way.

 

[Buraqibear]

Normally, when a character runs to dodge lightning—or anything similar—and can still fight while doing so, it should count as Travel, Reaction, and Combat Speed. That’s why I specified it that way.

I don’t think that’s necessary at all.

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump

 

[Apex_Predator_GX]

It seems fine to me based on a quick review.

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump

 

[ZackMoon1234]

It's looking mighty fine based on what I see.

Much better and more informative than the current versions for the Profiles right now.

The Tiers should be bolded for all of them
Physically should be physically for all of them
Other Anti-Demon Corps Chief should be other Anti-Demon Corps Chief = Ren Yamashiro, Himari Azuma, Yakumo Ezo, Konomi Tatara, Tobera Azuma

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump

 

[BlackeJan]

They need to be worked all around in general cause idk why some of them is scaling to shushu when she becomes a giant and only one of them could lift her up and the captains should be on par with each other in some sort of way

 

[MysticBrawler]

They need to be worked all around in general cause idk why some of them is scaling to shushu when she becomes a giant and only one of them could lift her up and the captains should be on par with each other in some sort of way

Technically they're not. They scale to Yuuki Wakura who in turn scales to Shushu

 

[BlackeJan]

Technically they're not. They scale to Yuuki Wakura who in turn scales to Shushu

7-C can from Shushu though. Also idk why we have them scaling physically when it was the peach power that lets them get these feats

I did however see someone calc Yakumo feat when dispersing cloud that they think it reached 6-C

 

[Black_Cat49]

I did however see someone calc Yakumo feat when dispersing cloud that they think it reached 6-C

It cannot be used because Mato is comparable in size to Kyoto, but the diameter used in those calculations is many times larger than Kyoto’s size, which makes the calculation invalid

 

[BlackeJan]

It cannot be used because Mato is comparable in size to Kyoto, but the diameter used in those calculations is many times larger than Kyoto’s size, which makes the calculation invalid

So we can’t even recalc it?

 

[Black_Cat49]

So we can’t even recalc it?

I tried calculating it, but a CGM told me it couldn’t be done. No matter which method I use, the diameter still ends up exceeding the limit. And even if I manage to keep it within the limit, issues with the angle still make the calculation incorrect.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Black_Cat49/Chained_Soldier_:_Yakumo_Ezo_Night_Storm

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump x5

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump x6

 

[Black_Cat49]

Bump x7

 

[MysticBrawler]

Bump

 

[Vietthai96]

Defeat Yuuki Wakura before he regenerates

This look like she just beat the dude, nothing suggest she neg his regeneration, dude is fine regardless, just got beaten

I have the same opinion as Tllmbrg. The rest seems oke from a glance

 

[MysticBrawler]

So can this now be applied, or is 1 more vote still needed?

 

[BlackeJan]

Where the calc that has everyone 7-C?

 

[Black_Cat49]

Where the calc that has everyone 7-C?

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...mages_the_surrounding_rocks_when_falling_down

 

[Black_Cat49]

So can this now be applied, or is 1 more vote still needed?

Just two votes are enough for it to be accepted. However, according to the rules, even after it passes, you still need to wait 24 hours before applying the upgrade to the main page.

 

[BlackeJan]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:I_am_myself_You_are_you/Slave_of_the_Magic_Capital's_Elite_Troops_-_Feats_AP_and_Lifting_Strength#Shushu_Suruga_damages_the_surrounding_rocks_when_falling_down

Ok got it. Why is everyone and their mother (heh) scaling to Shushu physically from her using a peach power?

1. It should be a separate tier
2. Only the captains and anyone above should be scaling to that