Shuna Profile improvement (Tensura Light Novel)

[Dark_Soul20189]

Hello, I am back with another profile improvement. While it mainly concerns Shuna, some of the changes will affect other characters, such as the range stuff.
This CRT will only do stuff until volume 7, since its main purpose is to fix and improve stuff.

Verse - Tensura (Light Novel)
Profile - Shuna (Light Novel) + some general stuff


Let's start simple with an intelligence addon.

her inteligence is only surpassed by Rimuru

Volume 5, Chapter 5

Ability Additions

Manufacturer is a new skill she awakened during her evolution to Oni

Tensura Magic (With Manufaturer; Capable of creating her own magic and should be able to use any magic that exist, this includes even the highest Holy Magic, Disintegration)

Chapter 81, Manga

Not sure what ability this should be listed as, currently thinking (All magic of Mjur and Power modification and power mimicry)

Shuna has analysed Mjur's Great Magic and improved it.

Volume 5, Chapter 5

Majesty

Mind Manipulation and Empathic Manipulation (With Majesty; Her skill allows her to force others to do her bidding, it was even stronger than Kirara's Bewilder)

Volume 6, Chapter 4 / Volume 5, Chapter 2

Ability Reworks

Flame Wall (description rework)

Illusion Creation and Fire Manipulation (With Flame Wall: Capable of creating a wall of flame fully able to block a single attack, while it is called illusion magic the fire is very real)

Volume 2, Chapter 1 / Volume 6, Chapter 4


Confusion (description rework)

Sleep Manipulation, Sense Manupulation, and Illusion Creation (With Confusion; Directly knocks out weaker enemies, while disrupting the five senses of people capable of resisting getting knocked out, even capable of shutting down sensory skills such as Keen Sense)

Volume 2, Chapter 1 (If this is not enough for sleep manipulation, I can add a clip from the anime where it is directly stated)


Support stuff

Healing and Barrier Creation (Shuna is capable of healing and creating barriers, she can also reinforce already existing barriers. She can even alter how the barrier of others worked)

Volume 3, Chapter 5 / Volume 5, Chapter 4 / Volume 5, Chapter 5


Analyst and its subskill reworks

Analyst functions similarly to Great Sage. Stated to have at least as good of an investigatory tool as Rimuru

Volume 2, Chapter 2 / Volume 4, Chapter 3


Analyst usage

Information Analysis, Aura, and Power Nullification (With Analyst; She is capable of analysing and neutralizing skills up to Unique level, even non-combat ones, such as Kirara's)

Volume 5, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 2


Analyze and assess

Information Analysis (With Analyze and Assess: Shuna is superior to Rimuru. She can even analyze objects through Magic Sense. It can analyze how strong someone is. She can even obtain Skills and Magic. It also allows her to analyze the wounds and how they were caused, all the way down to their effects and properties)

Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 2, Chapter 2 / Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 10, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 3


(Will add the abilities that were accepted under Haze to this ability, that already exist on the profile, alongside adding references.)


Ability movement

Control Laws (Law manipulation) is a subskill of Analyst, thus should be moved to her Kijin key, alongside its feats.

Spatial Motion should be moved to the Kijin key, as it is something that was learned through training, not the Harvest festival (Volume 6, Chapter 2)

General stuff

Range Additions


Magic Sense Range (Should be added in notes)

Magic Sense has a minnimum range of hundreds of meters

Volume 1, Chapter 1


Spatial Transportation Range

Normally teleportation is done through calculating coordinates, but it can be done within one's vision even if they are not capable of calculating, this would include the area within Magic Sense.

Volume 15,


Votes
Agree: @AlexSamDen, @Berga14, @Vietthai96, @AstraphelNoctis4, @Astral_Trinity439, @RaikiKurohane99, @Reiner04, @DarkDragonMedeus, @Elizhaa,
Disagree:
Neutral:


Notes
Some of the "range" stuff will be added to the Notes/explanation section instead, to keep the range section much cleaner
The magic stuff can also be added to the magic page.

 

[Berga14]

Let's start simple with an intelligence addon.

"Suspassed"
Agree

 

[Vietthai96]

Let's start simple with an intelligence addon.
Volume 6, Chapter 2

Can you point me to the part where it say her intellgence was surpassed on by Rimuru?. Scan didn't say it instead it say completely different thing

Manufacturer is a new skill she awakened during her evolution to Oni
Chapter 81, Manga

Oke

Not sure what ability this should be listed as, currently thinking (All magic of Mjur and Power modification and power mimicry)
Volume 5, Chapter 5

If she didn't copy anything then it isn't Power Mimicry, analysed skill could be under Info Analysis and upgrade skill is under Power Modification

Majesty
Volume 6, Chapter 4 / Volume 5, Chapter 2

The scan say a very vague thing about making other to do the user's biding, it is unknown wherever it is mind hax or control body, so you can either have Mind Manipulation only or Body Puppetry only, without concrete evidence, you can't slap all possible application into it like that, choose one bro

Flame Wall (description rework)
Volume 2, Chapter 1

Idk why Fire Manipulation was accepted, the scan pretty explicit that the wall of flame is only an illusion and not harmful, that mean the flame/fire itself is not real and do not burn anyone, just illusion so Fire Manipulation should be removed, Illusion Creation is fine and can stay

Confusion (description rework)
Volume 2, Chapter 1 (If this is not enough for sleep manipulation, I can add a clip from the anime where it is directly stated)

Oke though you should add that clip to be sure

Support stuff
Volume 3, Chapter 5 / Volume 5, Chapter 4 / Volume 5, Chapter

Oke

Analyst and its subskill reworks
Volume 2, Chapter 2 / Volume 4, Chapter 3

Oke

Analyst usage
Volume 5, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 2

Oke

Analyze and assess
Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 2, Chapter 2 / Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 2, Chapter 6 / Volume 10, Chapter 2 / Volume 5, Chapter 3

Oke

But how many time you gonna repeat that Info Analysis?

Control Laws (Law manipulation) is a subskill of Analyst, thus should be moved to her Kijin key, alongside its feats.

Spatial Motion should be moved to the Kijin key, as it is something that was learned through training, not the Harvest festival (Volume 6, Chapter 2)

Oke

Magic Sense Range (Should be added in notes)
Volume 1, Chapter 1


Spatial Transportation Range
Volume 15,

Oke

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Can you point me to the part where it say her intellgence was surpassed on by Rimuru?. Scan didn't say it instead it say completely different thing

My English just suck here, I am trying to find a way to say her intelligence is second only to Rimuru.

If she didn't copy anything then it isn't Power Mimicry, analysed skill could be under Info Analysis and upgrade skill is under Power Modification

She copied and improved it after analyzing it.

The scan say a very vague thing about making other to do the user's biding, it is unknown wherever it is mind hax or control body, so you can either have Mind Manipulation only or Body Puppetry only, without concrete evidence, you can't slap all possible application into it like that, choose one bro

Fair enough, then I guess Mind Hax is the closest to what is described.

Oke though you should add that clip to be sure

Alright, will do that in a bit then.

But how many time you gonna repeat that Info Analysis?

Honestly idk. Analysis and Assess is a "skill" in tensura that Shuna has, it is under the skill "Analyst."

Also, we separate them by "skill" or "ability", so some of them overlap.


I forgot this one...

Idk why Fire Manipulation was accepted, the scan pretty explicit that the wall of flame is only an illusion and not harmful, that mean the flame/fire itself is not real and do not burn anyone, just illusion so Fire Manipulation should be removed, Illusion Creation is fine and can stay

It is Fire manipulation due to that what it is. Illusion magic is still a part of the Aspectual magic family tree, so in a way, "it's real fire", not to mention it gets stronger down the line in the story, but that was outside what I focused on this CRT on, so I didn't add it. (So yes, it is a real firewall even if it is in the illusion family...)

“Melt all and wear it away—Acid Shell!”
The aspectual spell Adalmann had just cast conjured balls of liquid in the air,each capable of melting flesh to the bone. They rained down upon Shuna.
She didn’t miss a beat.“Flame Wall.”
The barrier of fire deflected and vaporized all the magic-infused droplets.

Volume 6, Chapter 4

 

[Vietthai96]

My English just suck here, I am trying to find a way to say her intelligence is second only to Rimuru.

Scan didn't say anything about her intelligence though

It is Fire manipulation due to that what it is. Illusion magic is still a part of the Aspectual magic family tree, so in a way, "it's real fire", not to mention it gets stronger down the line in the story, but that was outside what I focused on this CRT on, so I didn't add it. (So yes, it is a real firewall even if it is in the illusion family...

You need to add the part about it is fire for fire manipulation justification, otherwise the scan only say it is not harmful and is an illusion

Fair enough, then I guess Mind Hax is the closest to what is described.

Oke

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Scan didn't say anything about her intelligence though

Linked the wrong scan.... here is the correct one... (Volume 5, Chapter 5)

You need to add the part about it is fire for fire manipulation justification, otherwise the scan only say it is not harmful and is an illusion

Coverting it to a scan right now.

 

[Vietthai96]

Linked the wrong scan.... here is the correct one... (Volume 5, Chapter 5)

So you scam me?. RVR thread here we goes

Anyway this scan is oke

 

[AstraphelNoctis4]

Agree

 

[AlexSamDen]

Seems good to me

 

[Astral_Trinity439]

Flame Wall (description rework)

I think we're looking at different types of Flame Wall in both scans (given the name is not some super unique one here)
The 2nd para of first scan definitely says the flame wall blocking ranga isn't harmful

Rest seems good

 

[Astral_Trinity439]

Maybe the fact that she can create clothing with magical effects is also something? (power bestowal maybe)
if that isn't already on the profile ofc

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

I think we're looking at different types of Flame Wall in both scans (given the name is not some super unique one here)
The 2nd para of first scan definitely says the flame wall blocking ranga isn't harmful

Rest seems good

According to the wiki, they are the same, so it should be fine.

Maybe the fact that she can create clothing with magical effects is also something? (power bestowal maybe)
if that isn't already on the profile ofc

I just never found a use for it, until we have the equipment thing up, so I decided it was better to wait for that until we added this.

 

[Astral_Trinity439]

According to the wiki, they are the same, so it should be fine.


I just never found a use for it, until we have the equipment thing up, so I decided it was better to wait for that until we added this.

you could add
Power Bestowal and Cloth Creation with Preparation
but your choice

 

[Dark_Soul20189]

Bump

 

[RaikiKurohane99]

The proposal looks fine.

 

[Reiner04]

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Proposal looks alright.

 

[Elizhaa]

These changes look fine.