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GARO - Makai Knight & Horror P&A Changes

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Reworking the Makai Knight & Horror pages abit, basically compositing abilities into one page since they share the same general abilities.

Makai Knights - New | Old​

Changes
Universal
Additional anime information added into the Universal section​
Additional scan to Martial Arts​
Added Supernatural Willpower​
Moved Density Manipulation to Universal section from Kougaverse + added more information​
Moved Temperature & Vibration Manipulation to Universal section from Kougaverse + added more information​
Reworded Sealing​
Added Possible Existence Erasure​
Added Limited Resistance Soul Manipulation, Madness Manipulation (Type 2), Corruption (Type 1 & 2)​
Added additional scan to Lost Soul Beast about losing their sanity​
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Kougaverse
Changed Regeneration Negation from Low-Mid, Possibly Mid to High-Mid, Possibly Mid-Godly​
Added Vector Manipulation​
Added Soul Destruction​
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  • Added Anime Section with Acrobatics


Horrors - New | Old​

Changes
Added Acrobatics
Added Limited Incorporeality
Expanded on Possession (Adding humans can't turn back after being possessed by a Horror)
Expanded on Extrasensory Perception (Adding two new scans)
Added Enhanced Senses
Added Fire Manipulation
Added Pain Manipulation
Added Durability Negation
Added Darkness Manipulation
Added Resistance to Astral Projection, Corruption (Both Types), Madness Manipulation (Type 2) & Likely Soul Destruction & Existence Erasure
Added Immortality Type 2 to Mado Horrors
Added scan to Weaknesses
 
It seems alright, but I thought Horrors had type 2 abstract existence? Unless if I'm mixing it up for Inga Horrors or something.
 
Supernatural Willpower (Makai Knights mentally supress the power of the Makai for 99.9 seconds)
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This would be limited.
Possible Existence Erasure (Implied that Makai Knights erase other's existence upon slaying them)
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That's a stretch in my opinion.
Likely Soul Destruction & Existence Erasure (Horrors likely cannot have their souls destroyed by Makai Knights, as they are only sealed by them)
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Another stretch in my opinion.

The rest looks good, though.
 
Makai

Formatting

1. In Continuity (Kougaverse), there should be a ; or - after Mid Godly instead of :
2. In Continuity (Ryugaverse) in resistance section, there's a missing closing brace ) in the last bullet point.
3. In Continuity (Kougaverse), in the last bullet point at the end of the resistance section, it should be Vibration Manipulation and Temperature Manipulation instead of using a coma.

Abilities

1. In Universal section, why is it both Corruption Type 1 and 2 (in all ratings given related to it)? From the texts, it seems like the armor can only effect the user itself, which implies its limited to the person it is in contact with or very close to (the later being my assumption), so that would be Type 1 only.
2. In Soul Beast section, the abilities should be given a "Self-" rating as the description says it effects the user, but says nothing about effecting other targets/enemies (i.e., Self-Soul Manipulation and so on)

Everything else seems fine. Now moving to the next page:

Horrors

Formatting

1. Don't bold "and" when between abilities (i.e., it should be Soul Manipulation and Explosion Manipulation, not Soul Manipulation and Explosion Manipulation)
2. In the last rating in Universal section, use - or ; after listing which Type it is, instead of :
3. In Mado Horrors, immortality bullet point, same as point 2.
4. In Mado Horrors, list it as "All previous abilities enhanced, in addition to:"
5. "Resistance to" should not be included in the bullet point, and "to" shouldn't be bolded. List it as:
Resistance to:
  • Extrasensory Perception (Description)
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Abilities

1. In Universal section, the Immortality type 8 rating can also be abstract existence.
2. Their corruption resistance based on Makai Knights should only have Type 1 for the same reason as I said earlier.

Everything else seems fine
 
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