JJBA; Rudol von Stroheim "Rework"

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Man.

-Old Profile
-New Profile

it's not technically a rework persay but it's more like copy and pasting the old profile and then adding more scans, more justifications, some wording and adding Stat Values and References

anyways changes:
Already said then but lemme say then again
-Added more scans alongside removing no longer working scans
-Added One new ability in the P&A
-Added a Feats section
-Added a rating for his Ultra Violet Rays
-Added an Accepted Calc

Jojo´s Bizarre Adventure:Grip Strength of Stroheim

vsbattles.fandom.com

-and Added References and Stat Values

 

[Pyro9278]

Stroheim's new profile looks good, good work

 

[Purgy]

Minor nitpick but I don't think Stroheim qualifies as a "full" cyborg according to the cyborgization page.

Full - replacing exposed everything except the brain (and in some cases, it also remains a copy of the human consciousness that is used as a substitute for the AI). These cyborgs have virtually no weaknesses (you need to disable all of them, otherwise they will continue to function). However, they are humans with a very big stretch (as in fact they do not differ from the robots).

Large portions of his body are still organic and he both bleeds and sweats.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Minor nitpick but I don't think Stroheim qualifies as a "full" cyborg according to the cyborgization page.

Large portions of his body are still organic and he both bleeds and sweats.

alr changed it to normal

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Hi, I'm currently a ghost possessing the OP's body, and I gotta say that the "rework" looks good

 

[Bimbitesthedust]

New profile looks good

nice job

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

bump

 

[Damage3245]

Speed: At least Massively FTL (Designed to be above Santana and to kill the Pillar Men, albeit he falls short of the other three. Reacted to Kars and caught his sabre. Could react to Kars' Light-Mode, though was ultimately still tagged and bisected), Speed of Light with Ultra Violet Ray Blast (Stroheim can fire a concentrated beam of ultraviolet light from his mechanical eye)

Sanatana is Hypersonic+. The latter two feats involving Kars are both specified to be Stroheim reacting, so shouldn't this be MFTL reaction speed?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

fixed

Sanatana is Hypersonic+. The latter two feats involving Kars are both specified to be Stroheim reacting, so shouldn't this be MFTL reaction speed?

 

[Damage3245]

New profile looks fine to me. There's a missing brackets in the Lifting Strength section.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

New profile looks fine to me. There's a missing brackets in the Lifting Strength section.

thank you, and uh would you mind if you can ping a few staff on this?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

bump

 

[Lilybitdun]

Shouldn't he have At least Hypersonic+ combat speed due to the Santana justification with at least MFTL reactions?

 

[Damage3245]

Shouldn't he have At least Hypersonic+ combat speed due to the Santana justification with at least MFTL reactions?

Yeah, that'd be better.

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Was this finished or do we need another Mod?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Was this finished or do we need another Mod?

yes we need another

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

bermp

 

[Greatsage13th]

Nice.

 

[Random-Helper323]

Looks good at a glance.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

ok, this should be enough.

ok uh can anyone apply the rework.


Since I changed acc so I can have my name changed (I had a thread about this), I still need to wait a few days till I can edit.