Kriemhild Helheim Lebenstein Revision

[Megaraptor149]

So, to complete some character profiles from Senshinkan. I make a thread and add some feats to her profile.

It's for Kriemhild Helheim Lebenstein

Dags ansuz -- Hávamál: Kreimhild's signature and most powerful technique in which she summons Odin, The Head God of Norse myth to fight at her side. Odin can throw his spear, Gungnir, that creates a world of death at the spot the spear hits, instantly killing everyone caught in range. In addition, the effectiveness of this technique increases the more her foes think of death.

 

[Everything12]

Okay.

 

[Antvasima]

I suppose that is probably fine, but I don't know Japanese, so I am not certain.

 

[Megaraptor149]

So, should i ask translation staff for this?
And how about ask supporter of this verse?

 

[Antvasima]

Okay.

@HimikoWerckmeister @EdenSux @ZERO7772 @Qliphoth_Bacikal @SchroKatze @Ecstasy_Amphetamine @Dark_warrior_100 @PsychoWarper @Iapitus_The_Impaler

What do you think about this?

 

[Ecstasy_Amphetamine]

Ermm, I don't support this verse anymore, so with that being said I'm just going to go ahead and remove my name from the page...

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. That is too bad.

 

[PsychoWarper]

This should be fine.

 

[Megaraptor149]

Okay. That is too bad.

Maybe you can add me as supporter in verse profile later lol

 

[PsychoWarper]

Maybe you can add me as supporter in verse profile later lol

You can add yourself.

 

[Megaraptor149]

Okey thank you

 

[Antvasima]

@ChocomilkAlex @Maruishimaryishi @ShiroyashaGinSan

Can any of you verify the translation in the first post of this thread please?

 

[Megaraptor149]

maybe I should ask for the translation in the translation thread

 

[Antvasima]

It is unlikely that you will reach more success there unfortunately.

 

[Megaraptor149]

It is unlikely that you will reach more success there unfortunately.

Not really sure supporter this verse on this is really active

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. What is the source for the translation that you currently use above?

 

[Megaraptor149]

Okay. What is the source for the translation that you currently use above?

It's DeepL

 

[Antvasima]

What is that?

 

[Megaraptor149]

What is that?

It's translator

 

[Bernkastelll]

What is that?

DeepL is a machine translator, despite not being perfect, it's one of the best currently

 

[PsychoWarper]

Iirc we dont accept translation machines for Shinza cause he usually uses fucky language, if its normal Japanese... im still iffy about using machines but it would be more of a discussion.

 

[Dereck03]

DeepL is currently the best translator out there, professional translators aside.

 

[PsychoWarper]

I know but that doesnt mean it will be accepted especially since as I said Shinza is always fucky with his writing.

Like in DI when he mixed German and Japanese or K3 when he essentially used some old japanese that many current Japanese people dont know well.

 

[Megaraptor149]

I know but that doesnt mean it will be accepted especially since as I said Shinza is always fucky with his writing.

Like in DI when he mixed German and Japanese or K3 when he essentially used some old japanese that many current Japanese people dont know well.

Yeah your right.
But, the scans I post above are completely Japanese

 

[PsychoWarper]

Hmm thats not as bad but id atill try to get someone fluent in Japanese to check it to make sure it is proper.

If it is then it can be used imo.

 

[Megaraptor149]

It's Raw text

そのときそこに出現したのは、巨大な鋼の騎兵だった冥界の宝石を思わせる漆黒の鎧に身を包み、静艦ながら何者にも無視できない強固な存在感を放っているなぜなら、それこそ死という概念なのだから富は滅び、愛する者の憎むべき者も、そして己も必ずいつか死ぬ。誰もが当たり前に知っており、だからこそ誰もが目を背ける現実の最たる典型と言えるだろう。ここに顕象された黒騎士はそうした真理を否応なく掻き立てる者であり、時間すら停止しているような宇まいが死のなんたるかを雄弁に物語っていた。

そして無論、ただ静かなだけの存在であろうはずがない。彼は死神であると同時に戦神であり、ここへ喚ばれたのも戦いのためである。ゆゆえに今、武として神威を揮うことに一切の講路はなかった携えていた槍を肩に担ぐ。騎乗したまま、巨体に相応しからぬ流麗さで投換の姿勢に入った高き者の威容からは、紛れもない荘厳さが漂っていた。そう、死は回避できぬものだからこそ人類が有史以来崇めてきた普遍の摂理恐ろしく、忌まわしく嫌われるものであるが同時に、これは粛然と厳かに敬われるものなのだ。

よって目を逸らしてはならぬ志を己のものと受け止めて鋼の巨人はここに死の大槍を投げ放った。飛規する神威の一撃は、まさに万軍を突破する流星のごとし壊という印象はなく、阿鼻叫喚の一切が顕現しない厳粛に、ただ静然と、槍を中心に無音の世界が溢益れ出し、それに呑まれたタタリたちは悲鳴一つあげることなく消え去っていくその情景を悠然と眺めながら、第三歳生は苦笑した召喚に際し合一化したクリームヒルトの意だがそこに破

「なんだおまえたちそんなに私が怖いのか心外だな」槍は今このときも群がるタタリを討滅し戦果を拡大し続けているが、クリームヒルトの支持率は依然まったく変わらぬどころか、むしろ下がり始めているのだった。すなわち恐れさせることには成功しても、畏破や憧慨を勝ち取れていない現状は単なる力押しにすきず、そういう勝負で黄錦麗を繋すことは不可能だ先はと自分で言ったとおり、選挙の票数で圧倒的に負けているま事実、墳が生み出す死の勢いも徐々に減じ始めていた。支持基盤が脆弱なため、虚生の力が落ち始めている

I already post this in translation thread, but still no response.
Maybe you can translate this.

 

[PsychoWarper]

I unfortunately cant speak Japanese (I wish I could), sometimes it comes down to a waiting game here.

 

[Megaraptor149]

I unfortunately cant speak Japanese (I wish I could), sometimes it comes down to a waiting game here.

I already translate that, but idk if translation is accurate or not.
Or maybe it's better to wait for the translation results from Translation Thread.

 

[PsychoWarper]

Id say wait a bit for translation results.

 

[Antvasima]

Well, when I used both DeepL and Google Translate for the text above, I did not receive useful information.

 

[HimikoWerckmeister]

Hey Ant, thanks for the ping. I am currently in the process of working on the translation of that particular passage and can get someone that knows Japanese better than me to help with TLC [translation check] since the level of Japanese is pretty challenging for me. However, with my busy work schedule, it will take me some time to get a full TL of that passage out. I will check back in around a few weeks or so to let you know how the entire process goes.

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. Thank you. Tell us here when you are done.

 

[Megaraptor149]

Hey Ant, thanks for the ping. I am currently in the process of working on the translation of that particular passage and can get someone that knows Japanese better than me to help with TLC [translation check] since the level of Japanese is pretty challenging for me. However, with my busy work schedule, it will take me some time to get a full TL of that passage out. I will check back in around a few weeks or so to let you know how the entire process goes.

Nice, i will wait it