Pinhead key adjustment

[Qawsedf234]

Current profile.

I'm suggesting a definition change for his key. Why? Because this is not a normal Pinhead. After becoming Human again and breaking the devices of the Toymaker, he found an ancient being (implied to be Satan) that granted him the ability to break his mortal limits. That combined with magical artifact to increase his strength that he later consumes is what allow him to preform those major feats. At the end of the story the Leviathan strips him of this amp and he's returned to what amounts to normal.

So the comic profile should be replaced with something like "Amped by the ancient deity" or something like that, rather than just "Comics" or at least we need to separate the feats he has from before the amp to after the amp.

 

[Qawsedf234]

Oh, actually I should mention that novel Pinhead also needs to be changed. He does not scale to Lucifer, he needed to use a magical set of armor to fight with him

The Hell Priest rose up, the armor feeling good around his body, not like a carapace—hard and brittle—but flowing with him and through him, its power given over to him, wed to him. He was a force unto himself, beyond the reach of any living thing, and though the years that had brought him to this moment had been filled with the most intense personal suffering, it had been worth the agony in order to bring him to this glorious, heart-leaping moment, when Lucifer’s armor shot strength into every place where the monkish life he’d lived had left weakness and bliss into the muscles he’d hacked at in order to mold his body to fit the royal armor.

In an instant the Cenobite’s fear evaporated. The suit had accepted him as its owner, his magic was infinitely stronger than it had ever been, and the Devil stood before him, naked and wan. The war was not over. The victor had not yet been decided. The Hell Priest took a deep breath and then uttered the fatal summoning syllables of the Eighth Engine:

So instead of Novel it should be like "With Lucifer's Armor"

 

[ElixirBlue]

Seems fine

 

[Qawsedf234]

Actually as another adjustment we need the change the novel key even more. The armor isn't strong automatically but gains strength by absorbing energy/magic from things that hit it

The Hell Priest raised his own blade to protect his head, and the Unconsumed’s left-handed sword struck it, the impact spitting out serpentine lightning bolts that flew out across the heads of the assembled demons, striking stone dead those stupid enough to reach up and try to grab them. With the Hell Priest’s blade locked against one of his own the Unconsumed used the other to strike at his adversary’s exposed chest. Surges of power broke over the Hell Priest’s armor from the point of impact, their brightness melting into the armor, stealing the energy of the Unconsumed’s blow and adding to the armor’s power.

So it would need to be "Up to High 6-A" or something along those lines.

 

[Qawsedf234]

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Another bump

 

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[Qawsedf234]

plz

 

[Shmooply]

based
I obviously agree.

 

[Qawsedf234]

Made the changes. Tell me if you spot any mistakes.