IDW Transformers - Shockwave revamp and some other add ons

[Emirp sumitpo]

Old Shockwave profile

New Shockwave profile

• Better and more proper justifications
• New scans and references
• More tidy page
• As well as added a lot missing stuff like preparation related stuff

Nova Prime upgrade

Should be pretty straightforward. In the same scans used for his 4-A reality warping, there are several showings or spiral galaxies, which are illustrated pretty differently in contrasted to the other celestial objects, which are much more akin to stars. This should upgrade the Nova's reality warping over the Dead Universe from 4-A to 3-B.

Optimus' supernatural willpower add on

Optimus felt the pain and memories of all those who had died in the Cybertronian war and against Unicron, as well as every one of Shockwave's memories, with Shockwave being the embodiment of Optimus' greatest fears, and managed to overcome all of it. - Unicron #6

 

[Fastestthingalive50]

Straight fax no cap ong fr fr
Yeah this is good.

 

[LordTracer]

Looks good to me.

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Seems legit to me.

 

[SipJuice890]

idk about the Metrotitan thing, rest is fine though

 

[Ghostimuscrime]

Nice

 

[Planck69]

Looks good to me.

 

[KLOL506]

Looks good, much better than the old one. Upgrades are fine too.

@Elizhaa @DarkDragonMedeus @Crabwhale @Maverick_Zero_X @LordGriffin1000 @Just_a_Random_Butler @UchihaSlayer96 @Theglassman12 @ActuallySpaceMan42 @Nierre @KingTempest

 

[KingTempest]

Looks fine to me

 

[Crabwhale]

"used Ore-9 to teleport Metrotitan into Crystal City"
First word should be capitalized.

"a singularity that fuel Cybertron forever"
This is worded weird. Should be changed.

"Should be comparable i not superior to Thundercraker"
Minor mistake.

"and has consistently survived attacks against Grimlock"
Again, worded weird. For a durability section.

I'm also not entirely certain why the Intelligence section is formatted the way it is. Because it's long, I guess? The box makes it look worse to be honest, but maybe that's just me.

 

[Crabwhale]

Oh and for the record, the actual contents of the revision are fine.

 

[Emirp sumitpo]

"used Ore-9 to teleport Metrotitan into Crystal City"
First word should be capitalized.

"a singularity that fuel Cybertron forever"
This is worded weird. Should be changed.

"Should be comparable i not superior to Thundercraker"
Minor mistake.

"and has consistently survived attacks against Grimlock"
Again, worded weird. For a durability section.

I'm also not entirely certain why the Intelligence section is formatted the way it is. Because it's long, I guess? The box makes it look worse to be honest, but maybe that's just me.

I'll correct the mistakes later. But do you have any suggestions on how to format the Intelligence section?

 

[LordTracer]

I'll correct the mistakes later. But do you have any suggestions on how to format the Intelligence section?

You could probably just get rid of the scrollbox tbh

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Looks good.

 

[AerrowStorm1]

Looks good.

How is it, Megatron killed 100 Billion people and Shockwave is still worse?

 

[Crabwhale]

I'll correct the mistakes later. But do you have any suggestions on how to format the Intelligence section?

Just remove the scrollbox and leave it as normal.

 

[Emirp sumitpo]

Alright then.

Forgot to say, but I suppose GRACE has started

 

[Apex_Predator_GX]

OP looks fine to me.

 

[Emirp sumitpo]

I'll apply the changes now.

 

[Emirp sumitpo]

All changes have been applied, I'll close this thread.

 

[TWILIGHT-OP]

All changes have been applied, I'll close this thread.

It's still not locked.