Okay, as general naming thing:
- Data Manipulation and Hellfire Manipulation cannot be used for page names, as they're generic power listings already. You'd either have to give them special in-universe names or clearly define what franchise they're from like with Psychic Power in Warhammer.
- If forced for an original name, I'd go with "Digital Energy" or "Digi-Power" (despite that name being memey) for the former and the latter just seems like a bunch of different stuff mashed together, so I'm not sure what to do about that other than "Hellfire (Digimon)"
I was going for "Data Manipulation (Digimon)"... altho, we could go with "Digicode" as it is another Name given to it, or just Digital Energy i think works... will wait for more opinions on that from the other supporters
- All the names used for the blog seem to be the Japanese ones translated directly to English (Ultimate vs Mega) which confused me at times and I can see it confusing others. To my understanding, these are purely direct translations, and the official English media uses different terms. Shouldn't they be changed to reflect that, or at least give a "/" such as "Ultimate/Mega level Digimon"?
- This seems to run into a large amount of composites in franchise material, but I guess that's more an inherited historical issue than the thread itself
I am just so used to calling them by the japanese names i didn't even thought about it... oopss, i will do a "/" like you suggested, that should be enough
Digimon Physiology
The following line:
Seems narrower than needed. There's multiple overseers and while Yggrasil/King Drasil is the most common, they're not the only ones and Digimon can be on any multitude of servers. I'd remove the mention or list all the known host computers:
Very well, will change that into that
This links to an entire cosmology blog. You'd have to link to a specific section of said cosmology blog
Will do so, will link to the
Digital World section
Digimon is listed twice here "Digimon Digimon" and the explanation of "Usually don't die of natural causes" doesn't line up with any of the scans presented.
Will fix the former and change the latter into "don't die of illness", does that solve the issue?
This is technology manipulation. Possession requires direct control over a living being per the page:
So this power needs to be changed or removed
I thought possessing technology counted? I can change to Technology Manipulation
The following format is weird:
You have NP start with a "(" and then end with a "]", we never user "[]" to refer to a type and there's strange spaces everywhere. It should look like the following:
Will fix that
Of the list:
- You can't have Type 1 and Type 2 Non-existence simultaneously. Type 1 means you're a binary 0 to existence binary 1 and Type 2 means you're neither 1 or 0 in a binary system.
- Nothing given in your explanation justifies the above in almost any capacity. If its explained in the Data Manipulation page for Digimon, then that needs to be the primary justification and not the first sentence used
I see, will fix those
the NEP part was cause they can interact with beings that are Type 1 and other beings that are Type 2... but i suppose it is kind of redundant as the latter makes the former obvious, will change
This needs to be further explained to me, because you're contradicting yourself with this. If a Digimon is pure information, they cannot have a size at all since they're abstract concepts. Having an internal pocket dimension is also not a size justification and being able to adjust size does not mean they can become multiversal without a feat behind it.
Well, Digimon can give themselves Physical form via Realization... so you are kind of right, i suppose i could relocate that to the Realization section to make it more understandable
None of the above is corrosion-inducing unless you're arguing that Wireframes are physical material.
Hum... i guess, will remove it then
This should be "Digimon can resist being erased"
Will change into that
This should just be "Immunity to Biological Manipulation" since they're non-organic beings and Biological Manipulation covers all those powers.
Makes sense, agreed
Because Digimon have Self-Substance (All) they don't require breathing, meaning they would not qualify for poison resistance since they would never have to breath in the Sulfur in the first place.
This.... makes a lot of sense, yeah, will change that
This is just "Resistance to Data Manipulation" as Water is a byproduct of the Data being manipulated and not a primary usage of the power
I suppose? Will change that
Digimon Types
Reading the justifications, only Aldamon with it's ultimate move can reach 15 Million degress, so you would need to write "Varies, up to 15 Million Degrees" and then list what temperature each Digimon is scaling to, otherwise people will think Champion level Digimon like Meramon will have 15 Million Degree heat when that's not true. Even Aldamon doesn't have that level of heat normally.
Yeah, that part of them charging their attacks was to cover that... but yeah i could have explained better
i remember a scene talking about the minimum heat of Birdramon's fire, i could change it into "Varies from At least X heat, up to 15 Million degrees". Would that be acceptable?
Additionally, why not just directly link to the Digimon Encyclopedia for some of these?
I... thought i linked those too? If not i probably should, got catch, thank you
Mid-High is recovering from vapor. Since they require "Flame" to regenerate from, this seems more like Low-High or High-Mid
I thought Fire was a gas? If not... then sure, will lower it to Low-High
These justifications contradict the earlier things about then just being raw data. If they're abstract beings with no true physical form, then having fake flesh or being skeletons are meaningless for a justification. Unless those things actually matter, it should read more like this:
Oh that is actually... perfectly what i wanted to write from the beginning... just didn't "click" on my head at the time i suppose lol
Thank you a lot, that description works at lot better
All your sources state that Magnamon has control over Chrome Digizoid. Saying Metal generically gives an incorrect impression of the power
Got it, i suppose i could change to "Can manipulate Chrome Digizoid Metal"?
I see a justification for Type 4, but Type 2 implies they only exist in the present, which would be Versandi. Versandi is also a timeline, and the future is a simulation made by Yggdrasil. Since Type 4 would already given them resistances to timeline changes, I don't see them qualifying for Type 2 currently.
Hum... i suppose, since Type 4 change to having to list what resistance it would give them, i was thinking of listing it as:
Acausality (
Type 4,
Causality,
Fate, and
Precognition)
As logically speaking, existing outside/beyond Past, Present and Future should protect you from having those altered or seem into... what do you think?
But for this part:
To match the scan justificaiton, it should be changed to:
Noted, will do that
Does this count as free movement since all Digimon are already digital beings who can normally interact with stuff like EM signals and wifi?
I... think so? If you are arguing all Digimon should be able to do that... maybe that can go to the normal section instead?
I just wanna say thank you for the suggestions, i see a few misteps i needed to correct i am pluzled how i didn't saw before lol
Post Writting Note: Will wait to solve the issues with the Physiology Page you mentioned before covering the Data page post... feels more organized that way
